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Why am I immediately a simp for the creepy monster man, what is wrong with me? I have only played DBD a few times myself, but I still really enjoyed this and the overall atmosphere. I look forward to seeing what comes next!

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honestly i like this game, just the way you give us a way to actually do more then run and hide, i wont say any spoilers but the option to be a scrapper and have the ability to actually fight back feels good unlike in actual dbd where the closest thing to fighting is pallets and DS

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This one got my attention, and it was surprisingly so good! Very well written, and I absolutely love the UI and customizations features, I cannot wait to see more!!


Obs: I really laughed at some diary/journal entries, I love that kind of detail in games. :D

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Thank you! 💖 I'm glad the journal entries are getting some appreciation :> (I really enjoyed writing them!)

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I recently completely randomly stumbled upon your game and when I tell you, I got so fucking excited when I saw it's a DBD fan game!! And I was instantly in love, as soon as I started playing lol! I honestly instantly ran to see how I can throw a bit of money at you (I was glad to see you have a KoFi ❤️) because it's like you made my dream IF game!! For one, it's based on DBD (which is a game I have way too many hours in, and with which I have a love hate relationship at this point lol), and it has the perfect horror/lovecraftian vibe (I'm a slut for lovecraftian stuff). Two, it has plenty of dialogue and RP choices and I can play the exact type of MC I want, and it has an amazing and unique customisation mechanic which I've never seen before. And last, as an added bonus, it has a questionable, shady, huge red flag of a RO I shouldn't be thirsting over but here I am lmao, you can count me in with all the other Bastion lovers. 😂

I've been into interactive fiction for years at this point and I've read a TON of stuff, and I can honestly say that your game instantly shot up in my top five favourite IF games! It's genuinely one of the best games I've read. Your writing is wonderful and you convey the creepy vibes really well, so I can't wait to read more! 👀 One of my favourite parts so far was the trial with the Doctor in particular. I love your portrayal of the Entity's realm in general and am also definitely eager to see your take on other lore-related stuff! I also enjoyed the way you've portrayed the various DBD characters that have popped up so far and can't wait to see how you portray some of the other ones that haven't show up yet! I'm also especially curious if we'll see more of some of the killers and am wondering if they'll play a more prominent role in the plot, or if they'll just be an antagonistic force we have to deal with in the trials only. 👀 And of course, as for original characters, obviously the most prominent one so far is Bastion and as I already said, I already love him way too much lol. You've done a superb job with his character and I just adore the way he's written overall haha, so I really hope we see some more of your OCs further in the game, not just DBD ones, because I have no doubt that they'll be just as intriguing and well written! AHH, I'm honestly just very invested in the plot already and can't wait to see what happens! 👀

God, I can probably sit here and sing praises on your game for way longer than just these few paragraphs, but I'm trying to contain myself lmao. But another thing I also want to commend you on is the overall UI of the game and also the character customisation mechanic. For real, they're both fucking awesome. The UI is one of the best I've seen in a Twine game (I know I keep saying these sorts of stuff, but I really do mean them) and as I already mentioned, I've never seen this type of character customisation mechanic in another IF game before! It's VERY cool!! And I'm not just speaking from a player perspective here, but also from a game design and coding perspective haha, as both a programmer and writer that's also planning on coding my game in Twine. Seriously, you've done a wonderful job! I also really loved the MC profile page, and all the other additional stuff like the journal. I was always super excited to see the notifications for new journal entries and updates haha, and would instantly go read them. Oh, I also really enjoyed the music you've picked as well. When I play these kinds of games that require a lot of reading, I usually mute the background music because most of the time it's too distracting, but in this case I found it only added to the atmosphere instead of being distracting and annoying me.

Last but not least, the sarcastic dialogue choices were hilarious. I have a sarcastic dumbass of a Wanderer so I was picking those most of the time and I had a good laugh at some of them, especially the banter with Bastion lol. My favourite one was where the MC says something along the lines of "the unsettling grin, the claws and the morbid sense of humour are glaring red flags, but you're not terrible company". 😂😂

Lol, this got super long but I just really like the game so I kinda word vomited all over the place lmao. I will be eagerly and patiently waiting for the next chapters. Wish you all the best and I hope you're doing well! ❤️

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This is my absolute favorite comment, and I'm now madly in love with you.

Haha, jk....... unless? 👀

*clears throat* Anyway,

Thank you so much???? These paragraphs scared me at a glance ('cause I'm paranoid), but this is one of the most thoughtful comments I've ever received for my work! 💖 I have major plans for everyone's favorite characters, and I'm glad Bastion's getting some love, because he's going to be glued to ya for a while, haha. You're giving me way too much credit for the UI, because I promise you it's held together with glue and faith, lmao. It's an absolute mess behind the scenes, but I got it looking real pretty for public display 😅

Dumbass MCs are my favorite, and I'm glad someone's enjoying all those witty/sarcastic choices <3 (I've made a mental note to add way more in order to really let them and their dumbassery shine.)

Thank you again for the kind words and well wishes!! I will, in fact, be printing this out and tacking it to my wall 💖 Have a very lovely day! <3 

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Super duper mega late response because I'm a chaotic mess of a human being that only logs into her itchio account like once a month but... ahem, better late than never, no? 😂

Slowpoke! 😛 I fell madly in love with you first, courtesy of your amazing writing and cool ass game in general. 😉 Uhhh, I mean, jk, jk...... unless? 👀 Lol seriously though, jokes aside, I'm glad that my word vomit of a comment/review made you happy. 🥺💖

As a longtime writer myself, I more than understand just how important feedback is and how encouraging it can be, and also most definitely understand how awesome it generally feels to see a long comment about your work! And since I enjoyed your game so damn much, I only felt it was fair that I try to leave at least a somewhat long and detailed review, and try to point out some of my favourite moments and aspects of the game. So again, I'm very glad to see that my first comment seems to have uplifted you, and I hope it served as some good encouragement, you certainly deserve it. 💖

And hey, you give yourself too little credit in regards to the coding and UI! 😉 As a programmer, I feel pretty confident in saying that like... "held together with glue and faith" is a rather accurate description of about 80% of the code I've worked with/encountered. 😂 Hey, as long as it looks good to the public, no one has to know that it's held together with duct tape and that you're probably unsure of how you managed to get it working without bugs. 😂 It just works™. 😎 Seriously though, the UI and character customisation is fucking awesome! I really did mean it, you give yourself too little credit, so I hope you're at least a little proud of yourself for making everything so cool, even if it may be a mess behind the scenes. 😅

And I absolutely can't wait to see more dumbass moments from the Wanderer lmao! Very eager to let my Frankie's dumbassery shine it all its glory. 😎😂 And ofc, to see Bastion's reactions to my sarcastic idiot of a MC. 😂 No pressure though, of course. 💖 But yeah, stoked to hear that you love those types of MCs too haha!

And since our last interaction was like a month ago, I'm gonna repeat myself and say it again, but I hope you're doing well and I'm wishing you a lovely day as well! 🥺💖

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Sooo....









i want bastion to fuck me.

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No dinner date? No chocolates or flowers?? Can he at least get a hug first? 😭

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hmm that sounds lovely, but it's difficult to get that inside the fog... naughty naughty and cuddles will have to do 😌

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That's… a good point. I can't even argue that, haha.

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thank you for writing this story!! can't wait for the update 🖤

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Thank you kindly 🥰 <3

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Bro i love this master pieces so much and i can't wait for more content in it! :D keep up the good work and don't stress! <3

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Thank you very much! <3 

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It's quite refreshing to see so many people crushing over Bastion, coz mate, count me bloody in too!

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It's very funny that they'd choose the feral monster man over the other beautiful people at the campfire, haha <3 

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Hehe, that's really amusing,  but I wonder whether he can ever return to being a regular human 👀?

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But would you still want him if he were a regular human? 

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Why not? 😭...

Now, why does this sound like a double edged question...dear author you are dodging the question here 😂.. 

Tho I must agree with the fact that his feral monster form is more alluring 😌 but yh I'm still curious about the other form 🌝.

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I'm dancing around the question, yes 😂 I can't say if he'll ever return to a regular human form (because, y'know, spoilers), but Bryce was a decent-looking man before his untimely demise. So do what you want with that information :>

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dude oh my god. oh my god. ive never even watched someone play the game but i love this so much. first, im able to follow really well despite only having a general idea of the story. second, i love bastion so much oh my gosh. im so psyched for this game

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Happy to hear that! Thank you! 🥰<3 

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This is really cool

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Thank you! 💖 

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So, I  normally do not write comments but I needed to for this one because I am absolutely in love with your story ;u; ♥

I love the visuals of the game and the character customization as it really allows me to immerse myself ♥

I can't wait for the next chapter!

Also.... is it possible to romance Bastion... because... >->;... I may or may not be crushing hard on him.

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Thank you! <3  Bastion is a romance option! Proceed at your own risk 😊

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Ahhh, That's amazing;o; !! And you're very welcome~  Thank you so much for all the hard work you've put in and I can't wait to read future updates! 
 I WILL PROCEED  CAUTIOUSLY BUT AT THE SPEED OF A BULLET TRAIN xD

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I'm all in. Take my money! I want nobody but my "guardian angel." 

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A horrible decision I'm willing to fall on

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Of course, haha. Don't let me stop you! 💖

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I... can't believe you actually made some weird shadow looking guy seem THIS charming lmao aside from that, all this looks great !! I love the interface too, I just want to read more. Keep up the good work! <3

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Ikrrrr!!! Like so very charming :0

That's one hell of a skill to have!!

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it's either that or we have a problem lmao. 

Maybe it's both

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I suppose it's both 😂 ✨..I agree with you!

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wow...this is one of the best looking and interesting twine games on itch!

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Thank you very much! <3 

Looks pretty cool! Is it mobile friendly?

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For the most part, yes ✨ Let me know if you run into any problems!

Cool! And yes, I will!

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Everything okay with the mobile version. Played most part of it without problems!

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Glad to hear it <3 

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Love it ❤️

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Thank you! <3 

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This is such a fantastic IF, and DBD is undoubtedly one of my favorite games. Hence, this fan-made IF is a lovely surprise for me!!

Your writing is quite beautiful, and I'm really looking forward to the new content🤧

The joy I had when I found out that we could flirt with Bastian... Bloody yeah 😭 ✨, please tell mw that he is one of the ROs..

I'm sort of curious about all of the other ROs.

Have a wonderful day ahead 💕

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Thank you!! 💕 

Bastion is in fact a romantic option <3 And any other character with a meter on their journal page is romanceable also *wink wink* (You can refer to the Help Page in-game for more details on that particular topic ✨)

Have a wonderful day! <3 

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AAaA thank you💖 ✨...imma replay it for some more fun now :p... Bastian here I come again 🫡

Is there only one chapter available? When I get to Chapter 2 I'm unable to click on next chapter. I can do everything else but go to the next chapter.

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There are currently three available chapters. There shouldn't be any restrictions between Chapters 1 and 2, so I don't quite know what the problem is… If possible, can you show me a screenshot? Or describe the page in more detail? 

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I just can't  seem to click on next chapter it just won't do anything, but I can still mess with settings. 
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Ah; that's the intermission page between chapters 3 and 4. Chapter 4 isn't yet available, so there's actually supposed to be a line that reads, "Next Chapter Coming Soon", but I made a bit of a whoopsie there… I'll be making the fix in a moment to avoid any further confusion! Thank you for bringing it to my attention.

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YESSSS YOU CAN FLIRT WITH THE SHADEEEEE!!!

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YEAHHHHHHH WOOOOOO

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Interesting 😎

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Hi! First of all, I wanted to say that I absolutely love your game and Shade!!

However, I played with enabled then disabled sexual content and nothing seemed to change, so I don't know if it's a bug or if I just made bad choices

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Hello! As there are only three chapters so far, the only instances currently affected by that setting are a few mild lines of dialogue with The Shade. And they’re easy to miss, since you need to make certain choices/have a high enough affinity with him to trigger them.

As the story progresses, sexual themes will become more common, and the difference between enabling/disabling them will become more apparent. 

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hi just wanted to say i loved your update!!! im so invested!!! youre super talented :) also the changes you made are super pretty!! <3

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Thank you! <3 

Hello, I'm glad you're doing well. I'm not sure if this is a bug or not, even when I get a few "The Shade liked that" or what have you the bar on his page doesn't move. Does he just have a larger one than other characters?

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It's an oversight :') But I'll be fixing it in just a moment.  Something to keep in mind also is that The Shade's affinity caps at 200 points, unlike the other Love Interests (who cap at 100). For this reason, you'll only start to see progress on his bar once you've accumulated at least 20 points with him. 

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I REALLY  LOVE THIS OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG I CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE MWAH!!

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Ahhh I'm back here, I just can't get enough of this amazing piece of art 😭.. iam quite curious about the next update :

I really hope that you (author) are doing well ❤️‍🩹

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I'm well! And I'm sorry for such a long delay :( I don't have a lot of free time to devote so much of it to a free project like this, and I've been bogged down with other work recently. But I've made a few pretty changes to the game that'll be coming with the next chapter update, which I hope to have done sometime next week(?) Thanks for sticking around in the meantime <3 

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I'm happy to hear that you are doing well.

Please take your time, we understand that you have other works to do :) 

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Dwight is going to be mine!

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tbh its a good story i like it so far, i hope the next chapter comes out soon

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Love this story so far! 

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This is so good so far! I absolutely love your writing!

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I'M SO EXCITED!!! i love the fanfic and already the quality's insane. a character creator?? i never expected that!! the work you've put into this is insane <3

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Thank you, Mocha! I appreciate the love <3 <3 <3 

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This is such a unique and thrilling IF ✨ I love the character customization ❣️🙈

Can't wait for more ;_;

Is it possible to have a list of characters or something like that? I'm kinda curious ;)...

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Thank you <3 I might update the game page to include a full list of romanceable characters when I get around to it.

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Hey, how's chapter 3 coming along? Not tryna rush just asking

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Chapter 3 is complete. However, because chapters are rather short, I’d like to publish two at a time. I’m working on Chapter 4 currently, but I don’t have an ETA for you just yet. 

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Take your time, you're literally giving us players all of this for free

pardon me, may just have missed it; but, uh, what does the bar in the character tab mean?

Simple morality meter :> 

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chapter 2 babyyyy, can't wait for chapter 3 huhuhu

Do Journal entries carry over to other saves?

(Im dum)

You're not dumb <3 Unlocked/updated journal entries don't carry over to saves on different characters, if I'm understanding this question correctly... 

Thamks

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Got the "The shade really liked that" first try and im proud of myself

Can't wait for more!

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You'll have his heart in no time <3 

Thank you! 

I'm sooo excited for this! Let's go!

Thank you! 

ngl tho, i haven't played DBD at all because horror is just a huge NO for me bUT i did watch several gameplays before! yes, just the gameplays so i basically know nothing about the lore. ofc i know there's the journal, but still i wanna research ykno akwnkskaks that aside, i'm so so soooo in love with this already! and the UI, it's so cool aoooo i'm really in love with it okay?

anyways, i'm looking forward to the future chapters~

Thank you! <3 

I love this story already and I can't wait for more! Will you be adding new campers and killers with chapter 2?

Thank you! <3 I'll be introducing additional characters in the coming chapters :> 

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OOO I am really intrigued on what's gonna happen next, even though I haven't played DBD, playing though this got me researching every characters lore haha, hope to see more chapters in the future!

I have a question though, could we know what characters will be romanceable? Or is that still a secret?

Thank you <3 Love interests have a meter below their name on their respective journal pages. It will display their affinity level throughout the game :>

A minute or so in and I'm very impressed with the UI and intrigued on what's going to happen in the story. I'm very excited to see more!! 

Thank you very much! <3 

it's probably not great that i've never played dbd, but the entire concept of this game is so cool! i love everything abt this so far, n the monsterfucker in me rlly, rlly wants to romance the shade. i'm excited to see more :)!

Thank you! <3 You don't need to have played DBD before to play this! I've filled the Journal with a boatload of exposition for anyone who's not familiar with the game and its lore :> 

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